
PRESENTATION
Mentor Notes
-Extend clicker animation and character reaction timing.
-Trim "Friends Beauty" shot for pacing.
-Refine overall edit for tighter rhythm and flow.
-Accelerate portal transition to improve visual impact.
-Update HBO logo to current Max branding.
-Remove green artifact at end of portal effect.
-Correct shadow artifact in over-the-shoulder (OTS) shot.
-Soften rug shadow in "Lou Beauty" shot for realism.
-Trigger clicker sound cue earlier to align with action.
-Complete kitchen background plate and ensure color consistency across all "Friends" shots.
-Remove foreground vines for cleaner composition.
-Add background vines to wall behind clicker for depth.
Overall the mentors were very pleased with our presentation which puts us in a good place to make comfortable edits and tweaks for the upcoming weeks
